Agreed with you, Rubberdoll is a hot girl ^o^Uhmm this story is delicious,only nitpicky note try to break the text in more sentences instead of a long one, adding many conjuctions can be confusing :3Hugs and Kisses Alectra
Liked it. I would love to see a follow up of when she gets to the brothel.@ Alectra. Your a big girl you can deal with some run on sentences a for quality cap like this.Or to put it another way. NYA NYA PPPPPPptttt - - U
@ Geofrey i didn't mean that the writing was wrong just an advice on grammar and construction of a sentence ^.^ things like punctuaction, comas and things like that should be cared for a super awesome caption :3, if you care about it, i don't want to hinder anyone imagination or writing, i have my share too :3Hugs and Kisses Alectra
Delicious story - very effective.
Another great caption in this series! Imagine if all prisons were like that. Crime would either decrease or increase. And yes, Rubberdoll is a sexy woman.
I'd like to confess to a host of crimes to get in but I'm sure the conditioning would make me a productive citizen.Do I get a prison number?..)